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Snowfall

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they dance like snowfall
cavort playfully around the currents
and in the dark
when it all should be still
he listens to her breathe
and she counts the grooves in his palm
over and over again

the lace on the curtains does not move
winds do not blow here
inside, everything is at rest
sometimes it's all effortless 
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DeiSophia's avatar
You have some beautiful intimate details in your poetry.

but, somehow it didn't quite move me emotionally as much as I hoped, perhaps play more upon the connotations of the words?