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Eternity:
echoes of clear water on the polished stone
trees with veins that run silver
mechanical robins who sing out of reach

Life:
palms pressed against the surface
leaves of tin and copper, falling early
clockwork that is winding down

Time:
Patterns like writing, etched by rainfall
seeds in deep sleep like chrome
silence that still rings in tune
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tobywish3s Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I cannot explain how haunting this was to read. Thank you for sharing this!
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talvipaivanseisaus Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Thank you for your kind comment. It always feels good to hear to have touched someone with some personal words. 
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
I really like the way you intertwined mechanical and natural aspects in this piece. 
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naikki Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
..beautifully painted..
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talvipaivanseisaus Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Thank you. Some things you paint from your heart...
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like how you choice a title or topic for each and elaborated, good work
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